Passive Sentences 2

Children cannot open these bottles easily.
These bottles cannot be opened easily by children.
The government built a road right outside her front door.
A road outside her front door was built by the government.
Mr. Ross broke the antique vase as he walked through the store.
As Mr. Ross walked through the store he broke the antique vase.
When she arrived, the changes amazed her.
The changes amazed her when she arrived.
The construction workers are making street repairs all month long.
The street repairs are being made by construction workers all month long.
The party will celebrate his retirement.
His retiremente will be celebrated with the party.
His professors were discussing his oral exam right in front of him.
His oral exam was being discussed by his profesors right in front of him.
My son ate all the homemade cookies.
All the homemade cookies were eaten by my son.
Corrosion had damaged the hull of the ship.
The hull of the ship was damaged with corrosion.
Some children were visiting the old homestead while I was there.
The old homestead was being visited by some children while I was there.

Passive Sentences

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A client delayed Joanne when she was leaving the office.
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The tennis club was holding a meeting at 6.30.
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The doorway was blocked by Sheba, the dog.
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Joanne had to take Sheba to the vet.
Sheba had to be taken to the vet.
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Her condition worried the vet.
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The dog was treated by the vet while Joanne went home.
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The vet told Joanne to get out of the house.
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The telephone call confused Joanne.
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The police captured the burglar.
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Evaluation During Reading

When you are going to write an article it is very important that you investigate seriously on your subject. A well written article has various sources that you have to evaluate. You do not want to quote or state a fact that comes from an author who is not accredited or well reknown. Everyone can post information on the internet so you have to decide who are you going to believe, and what exactly do you want to say. When getting to know a source you have to be like a csi investigator; you have to check the person up as well as all of their work. Maybe read a biography on the author, learn some of what he writes besides the text of information. Most important is to not stick to one source but look around in the market. There are billions of books and cites and articles that are offering one same product; you have to know what you are looking for and select from the market what you want to browse. After browsing and having a general knowledge on each source, choose the most important ones, preferably few of them. Select those who offer what you want. You are the client so just obtain exactly what you want. Determine also what is in the producer's mind by exposing those ideas, what does this person or group of people want you to get out of what they write, basically what is the purpose of their piece so you can get that out of it. You have to be the judge and state whether this source is biased or if does not provide enough evidence to support their case. You also want to check if this evidence is pertinent with the time period because evidence and facts and opinions from our great grandfathers will not work as fine as those provided by scholars from this time. Finally be aware that you are doing this for your self so have the highest expectations and always aim for prefection, this way you'll obtain the best sources the market offers.

Richard Dawkins

I believe this man exposes his book in a very very simple way. I prefer when authors leave it to your interpretation because this means the book is not shallow and can be read in diverse ways. He doesn't get philosophical which is excelent and is most probably something he could do whilst talking about his book. I also like the fact that he is humble and he is not celebrating his intelligence on writing such an extraordinary book but he is admiring Darwin and his theory. This man in not just a writer but a true scientist. This will change somewhat my perspective of the book in a good way.

So That Nobody Has To Go To School If They Don't Want To

SUMMARY

This Roger Sipher is a crazy man. He believes education shouldn't be mandatory in public schools, because private schools don't need a compulsory law. The law shall set you free! I believe this statement is true and should be abided by all schools and entities. Education is necessary and this stupid, stupid man believes that if it weren't mandatory, the grades would go up and only those children committed to recieving a fine education will attend class. I think no kid wants to go to school, so they would be empty. We are very naive people and need some guidance and specially some strong rules so we can follow them and they lead us into a responsible adutlhood. Maybe this guy feels he is a psychologist and thinks that kids only want to break rules, so if there is no rule of going to school, they might go there out of pleasure. About 2% of our grade comes to school out of pleasure. Sipher believes the benefits to no compulsory-attendance laws are great, but I don't believe this thought should even be tested.

PARAPHRASING

Original: The solution to this problem is simple: Abolish compulsory-attendance laws and allow only those who are committed to getting an education to attend.

This conflict has a very easy answer: End obligatory attendance rules and only permit an education to those who are compromised.

The Power and Glory (Chapter 1-2 pgs: 7-30)

This Book written by Graham Greene is one of much complexity. There are two things that make it hard to understand which are some of the words and the fact that advancing to the second chapter just makes the problem bigger but there is a great mistery surrounding everything.
In the first chapter, we have the perception of Mr. Tench who is a dentist living in Mexico, in a very wrecked town. There is an doubt I have and this is if Tench is American or British. We know he is not mexican because he says so, but when he asks the stranger is he english, that is typical for a Brit to do. The word american referring to the people from the US exists from long ago and if this man were and american, he probably would have asked if the priest was american. Later on, Tench is meandering in his thoughts and thinks about the US and wants to be there but he knows that the town he is in is his home, so this makes it all even more confusing. I made an analogy but after ending chapter two because in the first part there is a description of the town having vultures on the roofs looking over them. After knowing that the town had heavy conflict and was invaded with army I thought to my self, why wouldn't the vultures be the same soldiers which never look away and are always there looking over them? Maybe the vultures are a way for Greene to show us that the town is a mess and vultures know death rounds the place so they have to be there awaiting for their next meal. I believe my first interpretation is much more open to future events.
It is pretty weird that Tench had invited this stranger just because he wanted him to wait in his home while the boat left. Nobody would do such a thing for good nature, and less when the person is in fact a stranger. After chapter two you understand that this man was a priest and now the invitation has more meaning. Priests get invited everywhere because people like to talk to them, for them to bless their homes and lives, etc. This priest is kind of a drunk because he carries a bottle of brandy around and is the first thing he takes away before leaving to help the kid's mother. He even forgets his book written in latin because he was a little tipsy and was angry at Tench for treating the situation the way he did.
In chapter two we learn that priests and those in higher ranks are being murdered by a group called the Red Shirts but with the presence of the army. The lieutenant was present during the killing of the monsignor. This makes me wonder if the Red Shirts are a group, or are really a militia that is part of the government. I don't understand what bastards these men are. First the governor for ordering all priests to get married and second the lieutenant and the chief for contemplating the idea of killing the people who wouldn't rattle out on the stranger priest. We really don't know from where are these two soldiers because they get a lot of mixed feelings, so their nationality would be another great thing to find out.

Kapuscinski

Frankly, I was not aware of the death of this great journalist. Ryszard Kapuscinski died early this year but lived long enough to live forever. On this show, the guest is Lawrence W., a great friend of Ryszard. He talks about him as if there was no man alive that looked like him. He told the lady that R.K. was everywhere, even in places no one thought about or no one knew existed. He was always sort of undercover because he tells a very funny anecdote in which R.K. was surrounded by Africans and he, the only white male in a 500 mile radius, was not seen by many. He then reads a small part on The Infer, R.K.'s most famous book but it is no very clear for a person who is unfamiliar with such book. The funniest part of the interview is when they talk about Gabriel Garcia Marquez. I would have never related these two great writers but they do have some things in common. Gabo is en escense a journalist and he will too remain always in our lives and hearts, making us look for a place that never existed but in the minds of the priviledged readers of Cien Años de Soledad. These two old guys were budies and even taught a seminar for latin americans, something I never knew of. That would have a been a fabulous experience. Even though he "seemed to be a nobody", as the poem tells us, he was actually a somebody and a great somebody.

SOCCER WAR - (Algeria Hides its Face pgs 95-119)

The Soccer War is a strange book up till now. I bought the copy and started reading over the very end of the summer, I was not able to reach much. I do remeber I started from the beggining, page 3 I believe. It talked about a hotel Metropol and about some men who lived in 8 rooms. This was quite confusing and I was not anxious to keep on reading. In class, however we began in the middle and I am getting to understand why. This is much more of an introduction to a topic than the first chapter.
Algeria is a country that has been dominated throughout its history. It had never actually been free until 1962 when Ahmed Ben Bella took over and freed the country from a French rule of 132 years. I believe it weren't for Charles de Gaulle, the revolutionary fight for freedom would have lasted longer. I cannot help but seeing a major reference to Colombia with this story. In Colombia we also have revolutionaries forming guerrillas supposedly to get their freedom. Although their views have changed drastically and are not supposed to be those of revolutionaries, the thought of guerrillas makes me make the connection. With Colombia, there are some people from the outside like some Europeans who think the guerrillas are fighting for a right cause and Alvaro Uribe Velez is a dictator and we are prisoners. This is not true but it its the conception for outsiders. I think this is what was really happening in Algeria with the French. The Algerians were tired of being slaves to others, of being chained to people who weren't from around. They really needed the guerrillas while we really need to stop de guerrillas. It is the exact opposite also because maybe the French, the outsiders, thought they were saving the country and the people and viewed the guerrillas as terrorists, which is what we think of our own guerrillas. When you think about it, the French coloners were the ones maintaining the country: they ran everything and owned every single company. When they left, nothing was actually left for Algerians but things they couldn't hold on to. They were in control of the money and the property when they were there so everything was a bit shaky when independence was achieved. I know from history that Boumedienne's government was much better and he got Algeria to become a little more stable economically. Something that may have ruined or not the book is the fact that I already know that Ben Bella was inprisoned during his opponent's reign. I don't really know how this will affect me but I will just have to read on and see what Kapuscinski, a journalist from the time, wrote.
Kapuscinski has a terrific way of writing because not only does he get your attention but he changes things and appears with news ones in such a subtle way. First he introduces the main event which is the coup. I thought that Ben Bella was a terrific leader, the man who got Algeria its independence, a simple man with a simple life, a simple attire and a very simple car. This is great in a leader I belive because they are not wasting time on material stuff and on how they look. I also thought of Boumedienne as a bad person and friend for having betrayed his friend with the coup. This is when we don't know much about the characters. Afterwards we learn a little bit about Algeria and its severe crisis, something unknown to the world because of Ben Bella's great words and actions. The country is actually suffering and bleeding to death. When we least expect it, we learn that Ben Bella is a power monger who may not care about his physical looks but wants everybody to like him and to look as a good man to others. He would lie by the minute to every person who encountered him and thought he could run the government of such a complicated nation on his own. This is a dictator and a country who is just a small baby in the world needs a strong leader but not this kind of strong. The country needed a person down to earth, who knew what he was doing. This is when we pivot completely our perspective on Boumedienne because he is actually a hero for taking Ben Bella away and freeing a wholle country. This man, who does not care about his look also, actually does not care what others think of him. He knows what is best and this is what he does, obviously with the army. This man was a 33 year old teacher when he threw the coup! He was a man of few words who did not have much of a social life. This was not at all like Ben Bella who was all about the "friends" and was elocuent and a tremendous liar. I prefer people of few, concise words because these are the ones who are actually listening. People who talk all the time do not listen because when you talk, they are only thinking what are THEY going to say next. I cannot believe the reaction of the people. Maybe they knew the public Ben Bella, the talkative, international man who saved them. They felt they were too cult to have a coup; that it only happened in other Arab countries. The confusion may be normal but the fear and the weird ideas of what was going to happen is not normal. This may be the reader's opinion because we don't know what it was to live there in that time. This is what journalists can never tell us, and less when they are not from around. Maybe it was because of the silence in which the country entered and the lack of organization and planning it all had. They were tired of Ben Bella but they didn't really know what to do inmediately. A plan would have worked just fine. I really hope there is not another coup, although I already know that. Anything can come up and I trust Kapuscinski as a journalist but in Africa anything can happen. It is the land of unstability and this probably makes it so interesting.

Part Two

As for the murdurer, Meursault is arrested so you can be tranquile; there is not a murdurer loose in the streets. In this part two, the book gets really great although not many events take place. When his lawyer is first interviewing him to know more about his personal life, he asks Meursault if he was sad about Maman's death. Although I was sort of ready for a cold answer (A simple No), his answer was worst than him shooting the arab. He says maybe he could have loved her but that didn't matter. That everybody, at some point wished their relatives were dead! What is this? I think the lawyer knew at that moment that they would loose the trial because he was dealing with a person who wanted his own mother to be dead. Why would a simple arab make any difference?
Another extremely shocking news was that he didn't believe in God. I'm just kidding because this came to me as if it were old, past news. I knew a man of such values and of such life style would not be interested in religion and less in the existance of a God. I personally believe religion gives people a direction and a way of life that is correct. Meursault also never met his father which is the lack of another important figure in his life. I think that the lawyer could have used these two arguements in court and they would have been of importance to the case. This knowledge od his lack of these two things made me consider Meursault's case and sympathize for him. It is not his fault so we kind of have to understand why he is an asswhole. This happens regularly in Colombia where children rarely meet their fathers and have a destroyed family which leads to drug abuse, or theft. I think the guerrilleros have had terrible childhoods without the example of a working father and mother. Maybe in some rare cases it would have been better for children not to have met their fathers because of abuse to them and to their mothers but there is really no way of preventing this until it happens. Either way, Meursault came from a home with an absent father figure (I know he was dead, but technically he was not there). The lawyer calls Meursault the antichrist and this is the most accurate description I've heard of him yet. When relating him to Jesus there is only two things I can say they have in common. First of all, they didn't meet their fathers but to Jesus this was a relationship from beyond. He was the son of God and he knew exactly where his father was. Even though, God always makes things right and gave Jesus and adoptive father who is Joseph. For Meursault it meant the opposite, it meant missing a grand part in his life. Secondly, their lack of fear for death and the fact that they would be sentenced to death and killed publicly. Jesus lacked this fear because he did it outof pure love towards humanity because his death saved us all. Meursault was just careless and had learned to accept the things that came along as they came along. This is actually somewhat of an admirable characteristic because he is not tied to anything but can advance and adapt to new circumstances.
Meursault says something that is very interesting when he is in prison. He says that at first his thoughts were those of a free man. He would still think about the outside pleasures and experiences instead of living and thinking in relevance to where he was. It is funny that all inmates have trouble at first thinking about women all the time. Non of them think about their wives or girlfriends as humans whom they love and charish, but as bodies who they want to literaly have sex with. They think about all women, and this is reasonable not being able to see one and being surrounded entirely by men. I think I would also have these troubles if I were in prison, because even if you are not in a relationship you still miss them. We can't live with them, can't live without them. This is the only thing Meursault kind of complains about because other than this sexual desire, he seeks nothing. He does not complain about the food he is getting or the bed, or the showers which would be things I would hate about prisons. The thought of these aspects makes me go mad, and think things through before because ending in prison would be my worst nightmare. Prison does have a strong impact on Meursault because he starts grasping the small details in life, not like before when he was just cruising through. This is why everything was so meaningless to him, because he never stopped and looked at things closely. Now even a small piece of old paper makes him interested. This story of the Czech is amazing and I think is put there by Camus so Meursault's crime or story doesn't look as terrible.
During the trial, we learn a new set of characteristics to Meursault which makes us change the way we view him. He refuses a cigarette which is an amazing advance. Dropping an addiction such as that is the hardest thing to do, I've been told. Also, in prison cigarettes are like gold and they can buy your life. This is just an interesting fact because although Meursault didn't have any problems in prison, he could have become very important if he was able to get cigarettes. The funny thing is that it happens in prison as it happens in the army.
Meursault's attitude during the trial was typical Meursault. He was absent, as if he were a stranger to the case. He did not listen closely to his defense and didn't really care much for it, although his lawyer did an incredible job. The prosecutor tried to use the funeral and Meursault's indiference towards it as an arguement to prove they were dealing with a senseless person. If was in the jury, I would condemn this man just for his attitude towards life. They also tried to frame him with Raymond because everybody knew he was not really a guard. Even after the incredible defense of his lawyer which we missed because of Meursault's day dreams, he was pleaded guiltyas charged. This is fair because he did kill a man, and although the law does accept some counter arguements which may show the murdurer as a person who didn't have a clue to what he was doing. This may seem good about our justice system but in the end they should face the facts, count the bodies and charge the killer.
When Meursault is in his cell, he remembers some of the lessons he recieved from Maman. They show her as a wise person, who lived much things and knew how to adapt to them, taking something out of them every time. She said that at the end of the day you could always find something to be happy about and Meursault agrees with her which is weird but heart warming. I agree with Maman too, and not only can you find something to be happy about, but you should look back through your day and mark those happy moments and realise that your life is not as miserable as you think. You just don't acknowledge the happy moments. Marie was no longer in his thoughts because she really didn't have an impact on him. He was not in love as I supposed earlier; she stopped writing and he stopped loving her.
After the priest comes and tries to make Meursault come to his senses, he gains this new inner strength to face his death. Before he was just accepting the fact that we will all die some day, maybe sooner than others and others will live on past you, but he had not seen it as something ti his advantage. After screaming at the intense priest and letting go of that represed anger in his heart, Meursault starts thinking like a phylosopher. Like Socrates, he desired death and seeked that moment where he will finally be liberated from that body that opressed him. The thought of death being so close gave them, as well as Maman the idea of rebirth. A new chance to start over.
To conclude this loong part two, and the end of the book for that matter, we end this book with a totally different feeling from the first one. At first we may become a cold reader as our character but as we learn he is indeed human, who has thoughts and ideas, you get comfortable with his actions and reactions and you learn to love him. You understand this troubled man and actually learn something from the book. I learned many valuable lessons from Maman and some from his lifestyle, of which I never approved. Camus presented an amazing character who was indeed a terrible human being, the lowest in society, but he makes you understand such a man and not hate him as much as you would with simple appearances.

Chapters 3-6 (pgs. 25-59)

In these few chapters Meursault has a lot of activity and ends the first part with an assasination. First we get a feeling on where he lives and who are his neighbors who don't really seem to hate this man. Some, like Raymond actually like him because he just follows along and he does not like it when people contradict him. Salamano, the old man with the dog is a great character because he represents this sort of antique. He always wanted to act but ended building railroads, which is most typicall in a time where you had to do something "productive" with your life and you had to study something like bussiness or engeneering. Maybe his family was not very wealthy so he ended in the family bussiness or in a man's job. He is a man who denies and lies to himself constantly because he talks and treats his dog as if it had to stay with him forever. When the dog goes missing the man starts crying and you do sympathize for the old man, but just because he has to learn a lesson. It was the same thing with his wife and once she was gone, he saw himself in the obligation to buy the dog to keep some company. I think Meursault is going to end like this old man, with Marie dead or just gone far away, with nobody around him, just his cigarettes and maybe a tv.
Raymond on the other hand is this emotional, striking character. Although he is a bastard who hits women, by the end fo part 1 you can relate to him more than you can relate to Meursault. When Raymond comes in asking for advice, Meursault does not say anything defined. I am starting to wonder if he is gay, because not defending a woman is kind of twisted. Maybe he just doesn't care if a woman gets beaten. I believe Raymond could have gotten his seeked revenge by doing something else and maintaining his honour untouched. By hitting her, he just stoops down to the mistress' level and becomes the same thing she is. This is classic in many many films and books, this passionate love story where the woman gets beat up by her man. Fortunately he didn't kill her like O.J. did, because the story fo the book would have been twisted another undesired way. A good characteristic Meursault does develop in these chapters is friendship because Raymond can trust the fact that he will be there to defend him from getting beat up. I would not trust my life to this man, but Raymond probably doesn't know him as well as we do.
Another weird episode is with Marie because she proposes to him and even though it is not really serious or I didn't take it very seriously, it shows us that Meursault will just go with the flow. He loves Marie but he will marry any other woman who he "loves" as much as Marie. He does it just because. He does not show any emotion, neither with his boss who plans on sending him to live to Paris! His boss is mad for his lack of emotion and so am I. You have to think something about being sent to work to another city.
The last episode is shocking because after an amazing day at the beach, quality time with some friends and with Marie, Meursault ends killing a person. Not any person, the arab, brother of Raymond's mistress. In this case he was looking for it but it all happens so fast. Meursault is overwhelmed by the sun and approaching the shadow, this guy launches to attack him but Meursault had (very smart move) the gun in his hand already. Although quite shocking, I am more interested in reading more and finding out if something as big as this event will wake Meursault up. A marriage proposal, nor a job offer shook him of his feet, let's just wait to see if some time in prison or some kind of punishment will do it.

Chapter 1-2 (pg. 3-24)

Monsieur Meursault, the main character in this book, is a young man who I believe is deeply troubled. He bahaves like no other human being and just shocks me with everything he does, or actually everything he doesn't do. I have come to a conclusion which is that he is not overwhelmed or sad about Maman's death not only because he saw it coming, but because maybe she troubled his mind and turned into this almost sick person he has become. I think that may be a reason not to cry or to show any emotion for his own mother's death! Maybe the bastard is happy he doesn't have to sustain her anymore and pay for the home's services. I know they tried to live together but it didn't work and Maman was happy where she was, but he didn't visit her often. This is a terrific character because nobody in this world can imagine someone to be as heartless and dead as this Meursault. I would affirm and put my foot down that there is more emotion in a dead fish, but he is indeed a human, an animal of instincts. He wants a cigarette, he smokes one, he wants a nap...he gets one. If he's hungry, he goes to Celeste's and eats or just byes some meat or potatoes and eats.
When he meets this Marie Cardona, a girl whom he'd dated a long time ago, he just goes to the beach with her for a while and sleeps with her, as casually as he decides to smoke a cigarette. Maybe it's the culture or what the culture is demonly turning into; sexual cassualties with no ties, no strings attached. This really makes me mad (being a religious man) because it is what we are turning into and I do not like it. Sex is a very special thing and a man in mourning, I believe does not have a sexual urge, but this Meursault does. It just proves him a man with few values and a low self-esteem. I believe it is very important to get your mind thinking about something else besides death, but this is most certainly not cassual sex. Fortunately it is with someone he knows and not a prostitute, and although he does not like these women or shows involving them, there is not much difference from a woman who charges for it than a woman who gives it away for some nice words.
I don't know what to expect from this man in the next few chapters. What new ways of outstanding me and lowering what I think of him will he come up with. Nothing has changed for this man, but this is just his opinion after the first weekend after his mother's death. I hope and I am going to give him a chance to redeem himself and start acting like a person who's blood is still in motion.

The Stranger - Chapter 1

The Stranger, up till now is an easy book to read although not as easy to comprehend. I can't really figure out the time period; the only clue I have towards knowing this is when the book was published and this was in the 1940's. It is great that the book could easily be happening today and nothing about it would change. The main character reminds me of two little guys; one is Kartman from the show South Park and the other is Jake Harper from Two and a Half men. This is because they are just there doing nothing, not caring for what is going to happen.

Literature Blog

Fellow Net users, welcome to my blog. My name is Henry Serna and you are about to experience an adventure whislt reading the entries. The trip embarked by your person at this moment will last until the commencing of the year of our Lord 2008. If you have any inconviniences with my colombian style blog, call me an we'll talk.